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 Category:  General Poetry
  Posted: September 28, 2019      Views: 107

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 ABOUT
JAYBIRD1 

Born--1925 in the foothills of Appalachia eastern Ky.Have been writing poetry for
seventy five years.I prefer poetry that rhymes. Sonnets are my favorite form. Give me
a look.Hopefully ,you might like some of them.

He is an accomplished poet and is currently at the #22 spot on this years rankings.

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Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level
Trying to rebuild a fading love
"Could I Be Losing You" by jaybird1
More than I could realize
you, dear one with flashing eyes

lifted me unto the skies,
before the fall.

What once was true is true no more,
since fate came in and closed the door
to your heart, now I stand poor,
against the wall.

Must my wounded heart now die,
when it needs to soar and fly
like an eagle, hear my cry,
my heart enthrall.

Could you love me, love me soon,
from the morn, til fullest moon
and make my life as bright as noon-
Please hear my call.

1984

 

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Author Notes
Love wins again. We married in 1986 and lived
happily until death claimed her in 2017.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.

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