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 Category:  Spiritual Poetry
  Posted: October 14, 2020      Views: 15

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JUSTIN CHOPIN  

Has gone under the pen name of Boz Roz for about three years on this wonderful website. But since so many people were confusing his name with Bozo the clown he decided that he should just stick with his real name. He has a love of God life art and mu - more...

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Wanting to get out of my rigidness
"Dazed through this haze" by Justin Chopin
Dazed Through This Haze


Dazed through this strange haze.

Lost in my rigid ways.


I've been stagnated, and I feel so unclean.

Living through my meaningless routines.


God take a look at me, I must confess.

Unto You, my Jesus, that I am in distress.

Because I have made my life into a miserable kind of mess.


I've burned myself out through obsessive and idiotic cares.

I've let myself drown in the oceans of my despairs.


Reach out Your hand, my Lord of Liberty.

Let me know that You are there for me.


Save me and take me back to Your Promised Land.

Relieve me of my pain, and restore me as only You can.

Allow me to be more like You, my wonderful Savior and eternal Son of Man.

Author Notes
Asking God to help me to get out of my own rigidness, to allow me to be more spontaneous and to enjoy life a little bit more without taking it so seriously.
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