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 Category:  Romance Non-Fiction
  Posted: October 15, 2020      Views: 14
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"I am learning to write."
"It has been a long Journey with many difficulties...
"Losses, Depressions, and other Abnormalities."
"Come with me and watch as I grow and share with you!"
Doctor Ricky 1024.

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Chapter 3 of the book "Cup of Smiles"
A past reflection.
"Until She Again Comes Home?" by Ricky1024

While I was with another Amazing Journey Entitled,
"Until He Comes Home Again?"

"Until She Again Comes
(A Dedication)
Written October 15th, 2020
By Doctor Ricky 1024
Copyright © Fanstory 2020
'All Rights Reserved'

"Until She Comes Home?"
'I await, with her flowers in her hair.'
'Oh Dear Lord God?'
'How I wish she was there.'
"Until She Comes Home?"
"Until She Comes Back Home?"
'Again, to me?'
'I shall shed countless tears of past painful memories.'
'I shall try.'
(If I can?)
'To be that man she needs of me?'
"Until She Comes Home?"
"Until She Again Comes Back Home?"
'Lord God Above?'
'To me?'
'I shall not want, nor need.'
'I shall not sleep, nor shall I eat.'
'Yes, not a single thing nor morsel of meat.'
"Until She Comes Home?'
"Until She Comes Back Home to Me?"
'With Flowers in her Hair and Stars that dot her Hazel/Green Eyes.'
'Moon that Glows in her Smiles.'


'I will be Faithful and dear.'
'Yes, in Hope again she will be here?'
"Until She Comes Home?"
'And, finally?'
"Until She Comes Home?"
'I await all alone as the Blacken clouds gather higher.'
'Higher up in the Gray of Skies.'
'I shall get down on my two knees.'
'And, as I realize.'
'Yes again, with pretty flowers from her hair.'
'And, Stars from her Beautiful eyes.'
'I shall gently lay them down where she rests.'
'For she has *Died.'

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Author Notes
*Died: noun
pass away, deceased, gone.
'A Parents worst nightmare?'
'Is to lose that child.'
'No matter what age no matter what sex.'
'But too shortly afterwards?'
'To then lose your only spouse?'
'After a nearly 20-year marriage.'
My wife Carolyn Ann Richmond Harbach Smrkovsky.'
'Purposely, due to the loss of our son Jason.'
'Stopped her medications for three months.'
'And, as a result she died from a DVT.
(Deep-Vernacular Thrombosis)
'A blood clot from the leg to the heart.'
'Causing Two Heart-Attacks.
'The second one massive.'
"If you know anybody feeling suicidal please dial 9-11.'
'That my friend is a Horrid Curse in reverse.'
Carolyn Ann Richmond Harbach Smrkovsky
December 6th, 1952~
November 23rd, 2003.
Special thanks goes out first, as always, to Heavenly Father and His Son Jesus Christ.
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