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 Category:  General Poetry
  Posted: October 25, 2020      Views: 22
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I'm a young eighty two years young lady, raise four children they had ten children which increased the family with great grand children last count fifth teen. so there is never a dull movement in my family. I don't remember the date of my fi - more...

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Chapter 3 of the book I;'m still reading and writing
A Must Have
"We can't Live With Out It" by Miss Cookie Atkinson
About the Air

We shouldn't take air for granted,
For it is as precious as it can be,
Don't complain thank God we can breath on our own,
It's better then going where the angels call home.

Air fills our lungs for a specials reason,
When ever we laugh take breath, smile or cry,
It' better to laugh be happy then die,
We are able to blow up a balloon to decorated a room-
We are able to suck liquid from a straw.

We are able to make spit ball and shoot them across
the room,
The teacher didn't see you so ever thing is cool,
Must keep my head in the book,

Betraying a perfect student look.

We need the sweet breeze of air to cool our bodies at
Have you ever notice the sweet sound of moving
This only happen from the swift moment of air.

Even the whales and dolphins jumps high,
To inhale God's sweet air,
Birds dive to the surplus of the water to grab fishes to
This only happens with the balance's of the air.

We need air to hair dry our hair or we can't go any where,
We need the air from our breath to blow out the candles
Be it for some special occasion or after a romantic
Air has it's good point and it has its bad
Changing a babies diapers, don't run away.
I need you this minute for real, Hey, hey!
You say "How sweet he is ".after the changed.
He looks in to your eyes,
With a smile, when he hears his name.

Have you ever notice the sweet sound of moving leaves ,
That only happens because the swift moving of air,
At also makes the river slowly, moving towards the
Stream, with brings high waves upon the sea.

Ever the wales, dolphins jumps high
To inhale Gods sweet air
Birds dive to the top of the water to gab fishes to eat
This only happen with the balances of the air.
Air is a special necessary gift from 'God'
So take a deep breath and smell the roses while you can.

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