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  Posted: January 13, 2021      Views: 70

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A Memory Care Hospital Visit
"I said NO" by Goodadvicechan



SETTING: A private room in a memory care hospital. A female patient, aged about 63, is lying on a bed. Two vases of roses are on the side tables; one is full of red roses, the other yellow. A man is standing next to the patient bed.


FADE IN: INT. PATIENT'S ROOM IN THE HOSPITAL

GEORGE
Do you like the flowers?

ROSE
No.

GEORGE
Don't you like red roses?

ROSE
No.

GEORGE
I bought you yellow roses too. Do you like them?

ROSE
No.

GEORGE
OK. I'll bring you pink roses tomorrow?

ROSE
No.

GEORGE
Ok. No pink. I'll bring multi-colors. Do you know who I am?

ROSE
No.

GEORGE
I am your lover.

ROSE
Hey... Lover.

GEORGE ( smiling)
I'm glad you called me lover. So you do know me.

ROSE
No. You said you are my lover; I called you lover.

GEORGE
Do you know my name?

ROSE
Rose.

GEORGE
No. Rose is your name.

ROSE
No, no. My name is George.

GEORGE
No, no. I am George and you are Rose.

ROSE
NO. No, no, no.
(Rose started to cry. George held her. She pushed him away.)

GEORGE
OK. I am Rose...Do you remember the first time you made love? It was with me.

ROSE
No. He was a handsome young man.

FADE OUT:
( end of scene 1)

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Author Notes
Having Alzheimer decease is sad. My brother had Alzheimer decease and passed away a few months ago.

According to reported data: Improve your lifestyle for Alzheimer's prevention. Healthy habits may help ward off Alzheimer's.

Consider the following steps (Get doctor's advice too) to help prevent Alzheimer's.

Physical exercise helps prevent the development of Alzheimer's or slow the progression in people who have symptoms.

Eating a Mediterranean diet has been shown to help thwart Alzheimer's or slow its progression. The diet includes fresh vegetables and fruits; whole grains; olive oil; nuts; legumes; fish; moderate amounts of poultry, eggs, and dairy; moderate amounts of red wine; and red meat only sparingly.
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