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 Category:  General Poetry
  Posted: January 22, 2021      Views: 2

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"Life That Should Be" by elpsog
Tic tock, tic tock, tic tock goes the clock
But this day it has meaning to me.
Why? Because my outlook is in stuck.
Dear Lord why must it be?

No motion is in my drive.
Nothing gives me a notion to go on.
My name is Ray but it doesn't seem alive.
Lord please from the earth let me be gone.

Oh! My God that little girl is in danger.
She ran into the road and a car is coming to her.
I ran after to her as a saving ranger.
By good luck to me I lifted her to save her there.

Then came her crying mother in fear
Until she knew her girl was in safety dear.
Thank you Holy Spirit for what you did to me.
You gave me joy life that should be.












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