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 Category:  General Poetry
  Posted: January 30, 2021      Views: 60

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The first poem I ever wrote was when I began to write here on FanStory. That was a bit over 3 years ago. It opened up a whole new world for me and I was and have been hooked on writing since that day. I learned what writing in meter was, the diff - more...

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Pushkin Sonnet ~ Onegin Stanza
"Golden Enchantment" by Sugarray77
I amble through low country meadows
where hedgerows rim old weathered fields,
and catch my breath, for near the shadows
stand golden swaths of daffodils.
Capricious springtime lightly teases
while nodding heads dance in the breezes.
Their cheerful, undulating ways,
hypnotically ensnare my gaze.
I pause to view the sight and ponder
that there can be such fields to see;
enchantment washes over me;
I'm drawn into a realm of wonder.
Reflection lulls; my being stills,
as I commune with daffodils.



Author Notes
This is the final sonnet from the FS Sonnet class that has been taught by Jim (Pantygynt). It is a Russian form with a varied rhyme scheme. See if you can figure it out. :)

This is a Pushkin sonnet ~ Onegin Stanza
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