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 Category:  General Poetry
  Posted: March 5, 2021      Views: 16

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AudreyRose is a loving mommy of 3. She is married to her Prince Charming and has finally found her happily ever after. There are all kinds of beautiful things trapped inside of her imagination that are struggling to be freed on a nice blank sheet of - more...

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Feeling a little lost...
"Dark Path" by AudreyRose
Away from home I wondered

Beneath the clouds that blocked the sun

Covering the path with their shadows

Down the way back I could no longer find

Ever now I look, lighting my candle

Fighting my way among the shadows

Gaining strength and ground

However, I do not know

If I am going the right way

Just when I am sure I aim true

Killer doubt manifests

Long gray robes trailing behind

Mingling with the shadows around me

Numbing my hope

Opening my wounds

Pulling me back down

Quiet as death and still

Ringing in my ears like a drum, yet


Too still

Unlike the fire, always dancing

Veiling love in heat

Where is my sunlight, my heat

X marks the spot, I need the x

Yet alas, of course, with just the shadows

Zero paths show the way back to the home from which I wondered

ABC Poetry Contest contest entry

Author Notes
I tried to go for the whole alphabet!
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