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An eight line acrostic, humour poem; pl read Author Notes
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  Posted: March 7, 2021      Views: 29

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I work as a Medical Service Aide at an hospital in St Johns NL. I love people and enjoy working there. I love writing poetry and reading other peoples poetry. I find writing very therapeutic and write on a daily basis. I enjoy all kinds of poetr - more...

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Your guardian angel shows up when you need them
"My Guardian Angel" by Joanne Gill

While window shopping my eye caught sight of a beautiful elegant angel. 

She wore a long white dress with silver sparkles and had pink wings with an iridescent glow.  Her captivating eyes were the bluest I ever saw. Radiant blond locks fell over her shoulders.

The angel cost two hundred dollars. I had one hundred. I reached into my pocket, was about to inform the cashier of my dilemma when I realized there was two hundred. I wondered how the exact amount of money I needed mysteriously ended up in my pocket.

During my walk. I heard a voice saying ; hi Joanne I am Eternity your guardian angel. Whenever you need me I shall appear.  She flew out of my bag and sat on my shoulder. Whenever I feel sad Eternity wraps her shimmering pink wings around me assuring me I am loved and I'm going to be okay.

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Author Notes
Eternity was my guardian angel she secretly put 100 dollars in my pocket. I was able to buy the angel
I so desperately wanted. I believe we all have a guardian angel in life that helps us through dark days. My photo is from google.
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