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 Category:  General Poetry
  Posted: August 1, 2021      Views: 91

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Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level
Mmmm, really?
"Really?" by Beejay
It's really not fair, it should have been me,
Opening the door with that front door key,
But a week before the Wedding, he dumped me,
Yes, it really should have been me.

It really should have been me lying in his bed,
He'd love me forever...so he said,
But he left me and married someone else, instead,
Yes, it really should have been me.

It really should have been me at the gym,
Having the fee paid by him,
I wouldn't look like this, I'd be really slim,
Yes, it really should have been me.

It really should be me, in the press,
About his Lotto win, I'd dress to impress,
No more money worries, I'd be happy, at last,
Yes, it really should have been me.

It really should have been me on that cruise,
Five star cuisine, endless booze,
Luxurious cabin, endless view,
What's that headline on the news?
"Cruise ship sadly lost at sea".....

Really??


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