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... ¿quien sufre?...¿lo que somos o lo que creemos ser?...
No by leomen
 Category:  Spiritual Poetry
  Posted: April 5, 2012      Views: 393

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No me ves:

soy un abismo de lagrimas,

la cascada del ayer

se despeña con fuerza;

sobre el flanco  de mi corazón.


 
No me oyes:

soy un sollozo perpetuo,

el clamor de la congoja

retumba con fuerza,

sobre el silencio

de mi oculto.


 
No me concibes:

soy un frio transitar

sobre sendas de penumbra,

y se acentúa el frio

cuando llega la memoria

abundante de pasado.



Me llena el recuerdo

me conmueve,

me estremece y no vacila;

acomete con fuerza,

sobre aquel que creo ser.


 
Tanta desolación

y sigo siendo:

¿Por qué?
 

 
 
 
 
 


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..es sufrimiento nos lleva a lo profundo de nuestro ser, una vez alli se desvanece.....( gracias a "Bertodi" por ofrecer su trabajo)            &am
Pays one point and 2 member cents. Artwork by Renate-Bertodi at FanArtReview.com

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