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 Category:  General Poetry
  Posted: May 10, 2015      Views: 31

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PATCELAW 

I recently moved from Las Cruces, New Mexico to live in Glendale Arizona. I live with my daughter and son-in-law. Since I have vision and health issues, I need to be with family since I can no longer drive.
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"Jesus" by patcelaw
 
Jesus
called my name
saying come here
so I can show you
a better way to live.
I will forgive you all sin
purging you from darkness within.
In your life I want to reign
you put your trust in me
I will set you free
just call on me
now today
Jesus

 

Author Notes
The photo is of an Osage Orange apple. As kids we had these on the trees on our property. Since we were poor and could not afford baseball, we us them as balls, and after 2-3 hit6s it was time to get another apple.
2,3,4,5,6,7,8,7,6,5,4,3,2 syllable count
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