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 Category:  General Poetry
  Posted: August 24, 2015      Views: 141

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Victor Touche ? Actually, a 59 plus five year imposition on this planet. Who.... always wanted to slow down, explore the other side of his brain, and amount to something other than a paycheck. Of course the other side of me would argue paycheck first - more...

He is an accomplished poet and is currently at the #66 spot on this years rankings.

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This work has reached the exceptional level
an evening
"Wallin'" by victortouche
What's Wallin'?

that's a little hard to explain.

It's a little bit of everythang.
Kind 'a like Sauce Americaine.

my daughter,
and time to spend.

Had a glass 'a wine
told her my dreams.

Tear in my eye-
she was mine,

We just glowed.
So did the waitress.

Even the walls seemed

Hey hey,
I put my hand
on the wall,
then my daughter's.

We're Wallin', honey.
She laughed.

Yeah, Dad-
we gotta go Wallin'


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I think maybe we all 'otta go Wallin', eh?
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