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 Category:  General Poetry
  Posted: September 16, 2015      Views: 67

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Where had the summer gone.
"Changing of the Guard" by Finglas
Dry leaves scratch the black top back of a sultry summer evening.
In the sweltering heat, those flora feet
Suggest summer will soon be leaving.

Whispered words from huddled packs of wind blown twirling leaves
Belie the fact their counterparts
Are still huddled in the trees.

The backdoor's been pried open and there's cool air rushing in.
The heat wave's finally broken
It's time, let the Fall begin.




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Photo by author. I love the Autumn feel of this picture.
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