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 Category:  Commentary and Philosophy Poetry
  Posted: January 9, 2017      Views: 124

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Those were the puff puff days
"Steam Train" by persevere
As the train approached the tunnel
A bellow issued from the funnel
The whistle blew and cinders flew
The locomotive slowed,then sped up anew

Further down the line it started to rain
The steam joined in, in a gentle refrain
The rhythmic click clack of the wheels on the line
Conjured up a song that would mark this time

Use These Words writing prompt entry

Writing Prompt
The challenge is to write a poem that includes the words provided. Your poem can be of any type.

The words:

rain - steam - bellow - song

Author Notes
Thanks to cakemp55 for illustration of old steam train.
Pays one point and 2 member cents. Artwork by cakemp55 at FanArtReview.com

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