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 Category:  Romance Poetry
  Posted: March 27, 2017      Views: 69

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Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level
free verse conversation
"Two Worlds Collide" by Jim Lorson Sr
I hear these subtle whispers, while gazing
out through the stars of our universe.
Having thoughts of this faceless woman
and her whispered words that we have shared.

She has said with this strong confident voice;

"Jim, you need to allow me to heal your heart,
to unlock what you've sadly hidden away.
Then and only then, will I reveal myself
to you, so you can believe in me when our worlds
collide bringing the harmony and eternal love
we both yearn for, BUT, you must trust in me, Jim"

"It may take some time for me to do what you ask."
Then I ask, "how will you know when I'm trusting you?"

"I will know when you are." She responds to my question.

He says to these unseen whispers, with;

"Prove to me that you are real, not some spirit playing
with my fragile emotions lost long ago.
I, yearn for a deep everlasting love to nurture, to grow
for two people to overcome trials and tribulations of life.
A love so satisfying which will keep us safe during our lifetime.
Can you give yourself unto me, that allows me to keep you warm
during those long, cold winter nights and days? To let me love you
unconditionally, so neither heart will be sad or to know pain again."

She responds back,

"Yes, yes and yes to all you ask of me. I will love you until
there's no more time for us here on this earth, while we move
around the heavens from our promised eternity. Let our worlds
collide Jim, for us to come together, to hold and love each other.
This has been destined by the gods of Orion to happen upon our births."

"If you love me truly, Jim, then, I will love you truly too~~~~forever!"





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Author Notes
A free verse conversation between to possible lovers' Sound like a truly good possibility. you think so?

Thanks for reading.......Jim

Also for this great artwork, "Celtic Fantasy" by Imagine Life, many great thanks. It adds to this poem!

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