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 Category:  Commentary and Philosophy Poetry
  Posted: April 5, 2017      Views: 124

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Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level
a free verse when the heart calls
"When Calls The Heart" by Jim Lorson Sr


Our hearts, the organ of life
which is so vital for our emotions
which allows life to be enjoyable
which makes sunny days to give us happiness
or that cloudy, rainy day has us feeling sad.

Values of life and the heart changes
when we discover the emotion of love
when heartstrings strum
when a certain someone
has your heart beating faster

To be in love~~a true meaningful love
has those butterflies in your stomach
has your mind whirling
has nights making it hard to sleep
but most of all~~~life now has meaning and joy

Love~~true love is all consuming
when seeing each other
when hugging, kissing creating desires
when laughing, snuggling, popcorn and movies
which makes these feelings absolutely incredible

Trust, honesty and belief in your partner
always being there to support the other
always being the best of friends to
always being soulmates forevermore
all of these things makes life and love worthwhile

`When calls the heart` creates an endearing life
of love between two lovers to last for an eternity


 

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I got to thinking about the heart and life. the events which may take place to create this emotion we call love. I believe if all of these things happen two people an and will overcome the trials and tribulations in life.

Thank you for reading this poem,,,,,,,,Jim

Also, many thanks to helvi2 for the use of the artwork to enhance this poem!!
Pays one point and 2 member cents. Artwork by helvi2 at FanArtReview.com

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