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 Category:  Romance Poetry
  Posted: August 29, 2017      Views: 173

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The dawn of a new world
"Genesis" by SweetStreet00
It was a dark world
The ground shook
thundering as the footsteps of armies tracked the land
Fire rained from the sky
crimson ash falling like flaming snow
Snow that burned the thundering armies
with their guns and blades held high
But then I met you

You with your infinite wisdom
chased the armies away with songs of peace and kindness
You cooled the fires and melted the flaming snow
that had once burned the heads of the innocent
You called forth a new world
One not built on hatred
but on love and contentment
And there was finally peace

You showed me a new world
One where jade grass grew and precious gems lay on flower stalks
You took my hand and led me down a golden path
We soared through a cascade of light
Light that shimmered like a thousand shards of glass
and through it colors of all sorts shined

We danced through fields of sugar and sweets
Candy thick and sticky filled our cheeks
and glued our jaws shut
so that no words could escape our lips
But it could not stop smiles from blooming
like the bejeweled flowers
And we carried on through the new world
A world made just for us




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