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 Category:  Commentary and Philosophy Poetry
  Posted: December 11, 2017      Views: 53
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RICKY1024 
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"It has been a long Journey with many difficulties...
"Losses, Depressions, and other Abnormalities."
"Come with me and watch as I grow and share with you!"
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Chapter 90 of the book Me Book
My thoughts on Holidays Past.
"Can You Hear What I Hear?" by Ricky1024
"Can You Hear What I Hear?"
(Sung to that Song)
"Do You See What I See
<><><><><><><><><><>
Written on December 11th, 2017
By Doctor Ricky 1024.
<*>C.FanStory 2017<*>
Night Number One:
"Said the Three, Wise, Men to the little boy...
"Do you see what I see?"
"Do you see what I see?"
...
"A Star a Star, shining in the night...
"Bringing goodness and delight...
"Bringing goodness and delight...
"And now, thousands of years later...
...
"Said the Three, Wise, Men to the little boy...
"Do you see what I see?"
"Do you see what I see?"
"A Star, A Star shining in the night...
"Bringing goodness and delight...
"Bringing goodness and delight...
"Now, thousands of years later...
...
"Do you see what I see?"
"Yes, do you see what I see?"
"A syringe, a syringe...
"Lying on the side of the road?"
"Someone disposed of it after injecting themselves and dumping the load...
"After injecting themselves and dumping the load...
...
The Second Night:
"A Child, a Child pumping poison into his veins?"
"Pumping poison into his veins...
"See said the Little Star to the "Three, Wise, Men."
"Can you feel what he feels?"
"Almost dropped this pen, from my Hands!"
"Can you feel what he feels*?"
...
"The ensuing pain creeping up that poor kid's veins...
"Can you feel what he feel?"
"Can you feel what he feels?"
...
"Creeping pain...
"In His veins....
"NOW LETS GO FUCKING BACK AGAIN!"

****

"Said the "Three, Wise, Men to the Little lamb?"
"Can you hear and see what I see?"
"Can you hear and see what I see?"
"And supermarkets are now fully stocked all over the land!"
"Can you see what I see?"
"Can you feel what I feel?"
...
"Yes, there are lamb chops and lamb roasts to be devoured!"
"Yes, there are lamb chops and lamb roasts to be devoured...

Night Number Three:
Lord' can You see the Glow?"
"Lord, can You see the Glow?"
"Now put on 'Your Reviewing Gloves!"
...
"Yes!:
"Welcome!:
"And, this now is the 21st FUCKING Century!"
"Did you know what destroys the ozone layer including the skies?"
"Soon, no more Stars will shine?"
...
"Star, Star taken from the night?"
"Is this considered goodness and everything's alright?"
"Is this considered goodness and everything's alright?" "Let's go deeper?"
...
"Said the little boy to the wise man...
"Can you feel what I feel?"
"Can you feel...
"What I feel?"
"I just want a drink this Christmas Night?"
"I just want a morsel of food...
"Is that alright?"
"Not at all!"
...
"And, as Exxon and all the other...
"Will-Less and Greedy... "MOTHER FUCKER AND CARELESS INDUSTRIES, pump the CORE BLOOD FROM OUR NOE...
"PETTY LAND...
"Can you smell and see what they're doing?"
"Can you smell and see what they're doing?"
...
Pollution blotting out the Son and Stars as fast as they can!:
"Can you see what their polluting?"
"Can you see what their polluting?"
"And, the little boy?"
"He is still thirsty and hungry!"
"And, someday will eventuall pass aeay as well as die of dysentery!"
"Why?"
"Cuz there's no fresh water?"
"But, plenty of oil?"
...
"And, as he died..
"His last words...
"I am hungry...
"I am hungry and thirsty?"
"Can you see what they're doing to he?"
...
"From...
"The Oil Industies to the Banking Industry...
"Yank of America, TD Touchdown Stole Your Money HoneyBank."
"Wells Fargo and Forget to Pay Your Bill?"
"Yank the Car and House from You!"
"MOTHER FUCKERS!"
"AND, it continues to this very day?"
"Why?"
"Because we let!them!"
...
"They give us credit cards with all their love?"
"Can you see what they're stealing?"
"Can you see what thrir stealing?"
...
"Pay them back with their greedy hands picking our poor pockets!"
"29.99 % Interest?"
"C'omon!"
"Do you like them picking...
"With their fitthy hands our pockets?"
"Wake up World before it's too late!"
Approximate Word Count 662.

The book continues with My Last Day's on Earth. We will provide a link to it when you review this below.

Author Notes
"Special thanks goes out first to Heavenly Father and His Son Jesus the Christ, FanStory and Tom the Administrator, Fan Art Review, this amazing and talented artist...
'cleo85,' and her incredible picture...
"Big Bang"
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