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    Surprise! 80 Words or Less Contest Winner 
 Category:  Humor Non-Fiction
  Posted: August 14, 2018      Views: 156

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This work has reached the exceptional level
80 words or less..
"Little Boys!" by Susanjohn

Another exhausting day and I couldn't wait to hop in the shower. All I needed was fifteen minutes for myself. Calgon take me away! Just as I was reaching for a towel, little Danny came barging through the bathroom door. The look on his face said it all. Those big blue eyes just staring at me! Had I completely scarred my young son for life? Frozen, I waited for his response ... "Mommy, you're not wearing any earrings!"

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Write a complete story in 80 words or less.

The theme is 'Surprise.'

You may incorporate this theme into the story any way you wish, but it must somehow relate to the topic.
Surprise! 80 Words or Less
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lol This might be a true story :-p
Pays one point and 2 member cents.

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