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 Category:  Romance Poetry
  Posted: July 8, 2019      Views: 42

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Exceptional
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Love Is Vital For The Heart So Takecare How You be Feed lt
"An Unoccupied Heart" by Earthspoet
Today I found "the loneliest place on Earth"
Would you believe
It was deep within me.
I searched this empty dark space
to see if I could find out the reason why I was feeling the way that I do
"and this is what I found"
a person who fell out of love many many years ago and has never found a replacement for that lost love to fill this void within, for I want to feel "occupied"
Needed, loved, and used.
I thought this one time love of mine would see me through; till I was old and grey.
Not being able to hold the hand I once loved,
and to walk outside so that "I may feel
as I see others feel" happy and in love.
With tears in my eyes I look to the sky and ask the Lord why,
I never thought this would be me
as I once had that love that everyone
Seeks and complemented us on when they would see me and her.
Did I take this once cherished love for granted ?
Maybe I did, "looking back"
all work and "not enough play",
but I did love her so
More than myself at times
Gifts was never lacking to her from me
but I know now that was not enough
but the biggest gift that I gave to her
was heart of love
Which is now broken and loveless



Author Notes
This was an experienced that l
would never wish on anyone,
the feeling is like no other; its Is the polar end of love, and when you are "in love" with that one special person, and then overnight as it seem's but probably there was undercurrent that was brewing up "slowly but surely" but that was then and this is now the new improved me.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.

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