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 Category:  Fantasy Poetry
  Posted: August 28, 2019      Views: 29

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Miss cookie is a seventy year young, mother of four children, six grandchildren, eleven great grand's at lastcount Oops 2010 had a great grand on 12/22/2012 God blessed me with another great grand daugther her name is Madison. I nicked named he - more...

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Falling in love at first sight
"Mr. Blue" by misscookie
I entered the club with multiplies colored lights,and thick haze of smoke
what I saw first I thought was a joke.
Sitting at the bar he caught my eye
I walked pass him acting mighty shy.

He was tall, slim with an interesting look
at that very moment I knew I was hook
This blue man, hosted his glass towards me with a wink
I smile with interest slipping on my pink drink.

Yes, he was tall slim, with a sexy walk
when he said "Hello" I could hardly talk
He took my hand and asked for a dance
I hesitate for a moment then said, give him a chance.

My purpose for coming here was to meet someone new
who would have guess the dude would be blue
Besides his blue skin and heavy make up
His manner was nice not loud a corrupt

Mr. Blue's hands grade my waist with a tender grip
smiling as he felted the movements of my healthy hips
He lend close to my moist lips
Closing my eyes awaiting a full elicits.
Instead he whispered in my ear" you're my only woman.
for eternally I will be your only man."
Then he kissed me on the dance floor
Yes, Mr. Blue is my loving man, forever more.

Author Notes
It goes to show the word not to judge a person's by the color of their skin.
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