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80 Word Flash Fiction
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 Category:  General Fiction
  Posted: September 14, 2019      Views: 163

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A husband's will
"Deception" by Neonewman

Evelyn wailed as her late husband's favorite gospel song flooded the church. "Why?" she bellowed. "Why?"

After the service, those who attended offered condolences. Evelyn played the distraught widow well.

The following day the will was read.

To my brother Pete, I leave half my estate.

"What?" Evelyn's eyes widened.

To my loving sister Abbey, I leave half my estate.

"Why?" Evelyn rose in disbelief.

To my lying cheating wife, Evelyn, I leave the greatest treasure of all.

My forgiveness.


80 Word Flash Fiction contest entry


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This is a contest entry for 80-word flash fiction. The word count is exactly 80 words.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.

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