Sue by the Seaside
A rude Limerick: Be careful what you sit on.
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 Category:  General Poetry
  Posted: October 20, 2019      Views: 174

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Victor Touche ? Actually, a 59 plus five year imposition on this planet. Who.... always wanted to slow down, explore the other side of his brain, and amount to something other than a paycheck. Of course the other side of me would argue paycheck first - more...

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"Enlightenment" by victortouche
Men know not what they are
nor what they could.

Lives to waste
as circumstance
stands circumspect
to what he could
or can't.

just wraithes
and writhes.

As time
and shadows
do reflect
an image
that yet
could be.

I can.
I will.
But, still
I sit...

upon a shelf
that overlooks
the ocean all
which briefly held
the mysteries
and all I thought

to be.


Author Notes
I did plagiarize myself a bit with this poem.
Sorry. Ok, because of requests, here is MY
poem I plagiarized from. I meant this as a minor joke, but I can see
how people could be curious as to what I mean and how much was/
is the same. The original poem is-"Now I Drink Her 'Round."
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