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 Category:  General Poetry
  Posted: December 1, 2019      Views: 6

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Lord my dear wife is in a bad condition.
"Oh! Lord Give To Me Your Call" by elpsog
Oh! Lord give to me Your call
So! On heaven's door I may knock.

Yea, Your Majesty my knees are sore
But worse, horrors fill my mind
Knowing soon assets will be no more
And no solution can I find.

Nay, Your Lord concern is not for me
But for my wife, my fife's love and best friend.
I plead, from the coming disaster set me free.
Double my pain but a solution to her send.

Roast me long in the cleaning fire
But for my lady joy I desire.




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Please God take my wife's sadness away.
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