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  Posted: December 9, 2019      Views: 45

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Sunny, George and Dr. Jackyl
"Sunny's Appointment" by LeannaP

Sunny and George have just entered a doctor's office. Sunny is there for a routine checkup. George tagged along for the visit in case the "mole on Sunny's left cheek" was anything more than what he thought it would be. Sunny is unemployed, and George is a pediatrician.

Dr. Jackyl: Hi Sunny! It is so good to see you. However, the nurse informed me that you do not have insurance that covers your visit for today. Please call me back and make an appointment when you do.

Sunny: Oh Please doctor, won't you see me just this once so that I can figure out what in god's name is growing on my face?

Dr. Jackyl: I beg your pardon?

George: I'll pay up front whatever the cost is doctor. He just needs to see you immediately as I suspect the mole on his face might be cancerous.

Dr. Jackyl: Oh no! I certainly wouldn't jump to any conclusions without having me take a look at the mole on Sunny's face.

Dr. Jackyl points to the desk where a nurse is seated collecting patients information.

Dr. Jackyl: Over there! She says. Over there is where you can pay for Sunny's visit. She will need Sunny's information. The nurse will page me when everything is all set.

Now inside the doctors office after George pays, Dr. Jackyl makes a quick and interesting discovery.

Dr. Jackyl: Yes, it does seem to be cancerous. We will need to perform a procedure to have it surgically removed. This will in fact cost you more money Sunny.

Sunny: Oh dear lord.

George: Why don't you keep my credit card number on file. Bill it. I will pay for the rest of Sunny's medical fees.

Sunny: Thank you, George. I promise to make this up to you.

George: No need.

Dr. Jackyl: You sure are some friend.

Sunny: Well, we aren't exactly friends.

Dr. Jackyl: I see. Well Sunny you sure are lucky.

Sunny. Yes I am. Yes I am indeed

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