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 Category:  General Poetry
  Posted: January 23, 2020      Views: 45

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Amphion Poetry
"Patiently Waiting" by Sugarray77
But, Mommy I don't need to go,
my pants are dry
please, tell me why
you must insist I sit just so?

I'll just recline
and take my time.

Hey, Mom have you forgotten me?
It's been so long.
Is something wrong?
I'm waiting for you patiently.



Author Notes
An Amphion is another 20th century American verse form created by Viola Berg. It alternates enveloping tetrameter lines with coupled dimeter lines in a set sequence. The rules of an Amphion are :
1. A poem of 10 lines.
2. An iambic metered poem with tetrameter lines that alternate with sets of dimeter couplets in an enveloping manner.
3. Rhyme scheme: abbaccdeed
4. Syllabic, with a syllable count of: 8,4,4,8,4,4,8,4,4,8

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