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 Category:  Horror and Thriller Non-Fiction
  Posted: April 2, 2020      Views: 18
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Chapter 6 of the book "Faith"
Past feelings.
"Lost the Stars! (A)" by Ricky1024



"Lost the Stars!" (A)
Written on March 1st, 2019
In The Ocean Club Hotel Casino Atlantic City New Jersey.
By Doctor Ricky 1024
Copyright © Fanstory 2019
'All Rights Reserved'

'I lost the moon, I lost the Son...
'I've Come undone!'
I don't think it's been too too much UC I'm now living on a planet of no destination I keep and try but contemplate how to die!'
'God what have you done?'
...
The Darkest now is clearly coming!'
'As the Tragic-Never Ever Trying Wind?'
'As I tried!'
'As I so tried to forget my Sin?'
'Lord God, I'm swimming in an Ocean.'
'An Ocean of No-Win!'
...
'I now was living on this...
(In my mind)
"Planet Janet!'
"Where the people believe there?'
'That this is the Real Thing!'
'Or, for the most part?'
'I Lost the Moon, Lost Stars, Lost the Son.'
'Yes, Lost Stars baby but where you are?'
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"Resting in His Soul" (B)
Written on March 31st, 2019
By Doctor Ricky 1024
Copyright © Fanstory 2019
'All Rights Reserved'

"Within the Brief and Noble.'
"Heart beat?"
"Comes Hope."
(Theology 47.01)
...
'Time is on my side?'
(So I thought)
'As my wife and a young woman named, "Angel."
'Provided some semblance of Hope?'
...
'As we three, on the Garden State Parkway...
'As my Heart was beating...
(So I had thought)
'Unfortunately, for me?'
'I lost my Only Son Jay?'
...
'Honey damn it to Hell!'
'You're going to get us killed too!'
Yelled out my wife Carolyn.
'I know dear but I want to beat the helicopter!'
...
Note:
'Unfortunately, Jason would have a Heart-attack in the helicopter on the way.'
'But fortunately.'
'They revived him."
...
"Within a Blink of an Eye."
'We were there as if there was any Hope?'
'And, am I at the End or beginning of my Rope?'
'I thought as we entered the facility.'
(Atlantic City Trauma Hospital in Atlantic City, New Jersey)
...
'The woman at her desk knew of our situation.'
(She must have been pre-warned)
'And, asked for our Insurance Cards.'
I stated.
'My employer?'
(Anthony DeFiglio Foodtown Markets)
'Recently downgraded and left me and my family with only single coverage, which I refused.'
I Replied
'So, that meant since I didn't have Family Coverage.'
'My only Son Jason was on his own?'
'But Fanstorians?'
'When and will he get the proper medical treatments?'
'Here and Now?'
...
'So, as if, "Desperately Seeking Susan?"
'She summoned another woman or Registered RN Nurse who escorted us directed us to the X-Rays Room.'
Note: This is where there were displaying, "Multi-Pictures," of my son Jason's brain!'
...
'The X-Ray Tech told us that it was the worst case in that facility that she had seen in the past Ten years of her career!'
...
'So, exactly what does that mean?'
'To me and my family?'
'I thought...
'He was just only Eighteen but in that horrible car accident!'
'And, later we found out that it was much more serious than we could have ever imagined!'
'And, his Life was now in "Mortal Danger!"
As the technician told us to watch "Brain-Blood Oxygen Readings.'
...
'And, as we did that and that was not good.'
'And, now?'
'Jason was in a deep Coma and raccooned!'
Note: Which means it looks like he was in a street fight!
'And, ad for our family and Jay?'
'We wouldn't believe but he would be in for the fight of his life!'
To be continued.
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Fanstory and Tom the Administrator.
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