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 Category:  Humor Fiction
  Posted: June 21, 2020      Views: 64

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"Dark Mistakes" by Praveen J.



I remember the opening of the first Victoria's Secret store in Dubai. For us Arabs, it marked a thrilling milestone. I excitedly took my family to the glitzy Dubai Mall, a black and white sea of Arab families.

My young son, Ibrahim, momentarily got separated from me, as I furtively tried to soak up the window display. I saw him in the distance trying to reach his mother's hand. I guiltily rushed forward and grabbed him as I put my arm around my wife. She recoiled to my horror. Ibrahim and I had both picked the wrong woman in black.

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Write a story of 100 words. not including the title. Any subject accepted. Must be exactly 100 words.

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Exactly 100 words.
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