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 Category:  Song Lyrics Poetry
  Posted: July 15, 2020      Views: 62

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Remember when we almost made it?
"It's Enough to Say It Was" by prodigal
Remember when we almost made it
Had a shot but we didn't take it
Had a ring on your hand and a plan
But plan slipped away
And all we could say
Was it was

Then I see you again
I'm with her, you're with him
I see the look in your eyes
Neither of us can deny
What it was

Is it enough to say it was
When what it was was all we had
And if we hadn't given up
Then it would have ended bad
And just because we gave it up
Doesn't mean there wasn't love
And I'll remember you because
It's enough to say it was

We were living in the moment
Made mistakes but we didn't own em
We were beautiful a mess I confess
But it all slipped away
What a sad day
That it was

The memories we made
Can't be taken away
We'll always have our time in the sun
Neither of us can deny
What it was

Is it enough to say it was
When what it was was all we had
And if we hadn't given up
Then it would have ended bad
And just because we gave it up
Doesn't mean there wasn't love
And I'll remember you because
It's enough to say it was

Author Notes



To be able to say: I loved this person, we had a hell of a nice time together, itâ??s over but in a way it will never be over and I do know that I for sure loved this person, to be able to say that and mean it, thatâ??s rare, señor. Thatâ??s rare and valuable. -Ernest Hemingway.
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