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 Category:  Commentary and Philosophy Fiction
  Posted: August 18, 2020      Views: 48
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I am a Kidney Transplant Recipient and amputee missing my left hand and right lower finger tips from Diabetes and toxic working materials (kidney failure)
An Ex-Aerospace Quality Assurance Manager, Inspector and Fabricator 35yrs.
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Chapter 68 of the book The Two of Me
Musing Free Style - Based on True History
"Freedom" by QC Poet









In a Free Society;
 Our Freedom Ends When Our Breath Leaves Our Body!
Words Leaving Our Lips Send them Into a Diverse Society!
We Are But One Member in this Diverse Land of People!

We the People Never Means You By Yourself!
Your Percieved Privilege is your Misperception,
Falsely Concieved and Constructed In Your Own Mind!

A Successful Society Needs To Be Equal and Civil!

Equality Never Shows Any Preference,
Preference Reveals that There Remains a Lack of Equality!
Inequality Reveals a Lack of Equal Justice!
Equal Justice Is Thee Balancer of A Free Society!

Its Pivotal Point Keeps a Society Civil!
Societies Rulers are Charged With Its Imbalance,
And to Ensure it Stays In a Harmonious Balance,
Its Rulers Therefore are Charged with Keeping Its Harmony!

Society is Charged with Producing Fair Caretakers!
What Becomes of A Society that No Longer Can Produce Fair Caretakers?
Its Caretakers Will then Add Weight to Societies Disharmony,
Its Rulers Therein Add Weight to It's Social Collapse!

Society Begins Collapsing as Its People Sleep Soundly!
In Muffled Tears Society Decaying Dies Losing It's Humanity,
Once this Flawed Human Society Disappears Mother Earth Again Heals.
The Human Life Cycle is Free to Thrive Once Again! 

 


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Author Notes
Freedom
8/17/2020
By; George Martinez
(A.K.A) QC Poet / Chochee Medina
The Chochee Medina ~ QC Poet Series (Chptr?) Freedom's Regeneration

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Photo Credit to Free Internet Download plus Author Add-ons.

Native American is my Politically Correct Term, for one "To American For Mexico and To Mexican for America", yet Born In Los Angeles, California.

In 2020 Great Imbalances in Equality & Justice, Remain in Our Society.
With the Recent Covid-19 Outbreak, Many Americans Who Have Never Felt What it Is Like to Be Discriminated Against, Are Getting a Small Sense of Having Their Free Society Perceptions Challenged - in a Way Other Minorities Have Felt them For Centuries, Simply by Being Asked to Wear a Mask for the Good and Health Of Humanity as a Whole.

I would recommend copying and paste of the attached link; to listen to Durand Jones and The Indications, Song - Morning In America.

A True Story Contest, Share a memory from your life. Share a moment, an object, a feeling, etc. This does not have to be a profound memory, but should allow readers insight into your feelings, observations and/or thoughts.

Morning In America;
https://youtu.be/JOkxt4Hf8bw

"As Human Civilizations Rise and Fall"

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