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 Category:  Spiritual Poetry
  Posted: August 22, 2020      Views: 18

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"Watch As God Does Great Things" by patcelaw

we step out
in faith, we're at a place
where we may watch as God does great things
through the many limitations of sins that have
us bound by Satan the enemy
of our soul by telling
us many
we drink
of the living water
and eat of the bread of life, God will
forgive us of our sins, making us His dear child
and giving us an eternal, home
in Heaven forever
to be with

-Patricia Lawrence


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The spaceship format was created by this author and has a specific syllable count. It does not nee to rhyme. but could if the writer so chooses.
The syllable count is as follows 1,3,6,9,12,9,6,3,1 then centered on the page for the spaceships.
The poetry can be as many stanza or spaceships as desired.
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