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 Category:  Spiritual Poetry
  Posted: September 27, 2020      Views: 25
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 ABOUT
BARB HENSONGISPSACA 

Barb works at the local food bank volunteering her time at the country market. Barb has lived just about every profession there is to do. She has had a wild ride in her lifetime and uses poetry to tell everything. She is a cancer survivor. She hates - more...

She is an accomplished novelist and is currently at the #27 spot on the rankings.

She is an accomplished poet and is currently at the #8 spot on this years rankings.

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Chapter 14 of the book 2020-5
just because
"All He Asks" by Barb Hensongispsaca
We have a life we think is hard
and no one seems to hear our plea,
when all we want to do is run,
that's when He says 'just come to Me'.

Our plans go wrong and all seems lost,
we get so mad, we feel angry.
We want to hit and fuss and yell,
that's when He says 'just come to Me'.

We have a loss that we can't bare,
that's brought us crying to our knees.
We need a way to stop this hurt,
that's when He says 'just come to Me'.

Our burdens seem to weigh a ton,
a way out there just can not be.
We have a Friend who'll lift the load,
that's when He says 'just come to Me'.

We feel alone, no one to care,
we're lost in our own destiny.
Our future's dim, there's no one there,
that's when He says 'just come to Me'.

We toss and turn, our bodies raw,
we cry in pain, pure agony.
We feel no one can understand,
that's when He says 'just come to Me'.

He knows our pain, our loss, our hurt
and He's the only one that sees,
He's been the path that now we trod,
that's why He says 'just come to Me'.

He'll give us peace and calm our soul
'cause He's the One to set us free -
and all He asks is just one thing,
give up your sins and 'come to Me'.

The book continues with It Lives In Me. We will provide a link to it when you review this below.

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Matthew 11:28
Come unto me, all ye that labour and are heavy laden, and I will give you rest.
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