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 Category:  Romance Poetry
  Posted: September 28, 2020      Views: 18

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The mood of inspiration combined with daydreams.
"Essence" by Edward Escobar
Spiritual beauty, the heart of
one's dainty innocence,
a rose bud nurtured under
watchful patient eyes,

breathless captured in a
magical vision through the
eyes of the the soul beholder,

as gentle as the sound of a
whisper, love and life abounding
in a bewildered glory,

eyes reflecting to the one
kissing her deeper than usual,

lost wandering in a dream,
visions of a morning sunrise
painted on the canvas of the
unborn, image of stars hidden
yet secretly formed in a starry
mystical way,

awaiting.


Author Notes
Let the sunset steal a moment to live a passing pleasure once kept from birth, freed.
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