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senryu contest
Those eyes by Neonewman
    Senryu Poetry Contest Winner 

Those eyes from afar
peeked my curiosity
'twas love at first sight

Writing Prompt
Write a senryu. Unrhymed Japanese verse of 5/7/5 syllables. Using human emotion.
Senryu Poetry
Contest Winner

Author Notes
With a little play on words if you will.


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