FanStory.com - Please Come Back Homeby jaybird1
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Done in Hank William style
Please Come Back Home by jaybird1

I'm lying here,
alone and sad.
You took the love
that we once had.

You left our home
and took my son.
I feel that now
my life is done.

I always felt
our life would be
a precious gift,
not misery.

Why did you go
and seek relief,
while I lie here
knee deep in grief.

Please come back home
and ease my pain.
Then we can say
"love wins again".

 

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Author Notes
This was meant to be fictional.I was only trying to emulate the simplistic,
deeply emotional writing style that famed song writer Hank Williams used.
It could also serve as a near bio of his short and tragic life.

     

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