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Silence by Tina Crute

Silence...

              It's DEAFENING!

                        I can't hear myself think!

                                  I can just hear huge nothingness...

Noise, come.

Author Notes
I reviewed a poem with this syllable pattern and it seemed interesting.
This poem is how I feel when I try to pray. It's so quiet that I hear the silence and have trouble focusing.

     

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