Storybook Characters Endangered
Dr. Seuss, Mr. Potato Head, and Snow White sound off.
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This is so cute and very well done. I didn't think I had seen you in a while, but I have been gone for a bit as well. Welcome back! I am glad to see others enjoyed it as well.


 Comment Written 22-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
    Thank you, very appreciated.

reply by Supe on 23-Jan-2020
    you are very welcome.
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jenintorre
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This is such a clever write. I keep asking myself why I continue forking out money on this site, it is so expensive and can be so frustrating however I am still here. Thanks for a great read. Cheers. Jen.


 Comment Written 22-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
    Thank you!
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kiwigirl2821
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I keep hearing people give Tom a hard time but hey, everyone is entitled to make a living surely...I enjoyed this and am glad you decided to stick around a while. Take care. xoxo Kiwi


 Comment Written 22-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
    Thank you!
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Jmf4119
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I love this Dennis. You are a great story teller and writing in dialogue is really quite a talent.
I understand your frustration and wish there was a better site to fix all our issues.

Well done my friend.
Blessings
Janet


 Comment Written 21-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
    Thank you!
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xvi
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I love the allusion to romantic speech in this piece. I especially loved the lines, "'Of course I do. I've nurtured you from a lump of coal into a...a polished piece of coal...from a puppy, to a real dog of a writer.'" I really appreciated the "lump of coal" changing into a "polished piece of coal". Such a subtle change. That turned this from a exercise to a craft in that moment.


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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
    Thank you!
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Aaqib Naeem
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Woww!! It was such an amazing piece of writing. You're possessed with such a wonderful talent. I loved it and enjoyed reading it completely. I hope you'll go miles as a writer. Wishing you luck.


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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
    Thank you!
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Susan Larson
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This would be an excellent entry in the dialogue contest. I've had these same thoughts, but then writing reviews exercises my brain much more than sudoku it mahjong and also educated me more. I'm having fun racking up points and member dollars, and also making friends while I do it.


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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
    Thank you!
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Elizabeth Emerald
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My sentiments exactly!

I just joined four days ago; this is my first review. I've already entered three
contests and had to pay real $$$ in order to get readership. So thanks
for the first drop in my virtual bucket!

Cheers.


 Comment Written 20-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
    Thank you!

reply by the author on 20-Nov-2020
    Hey! You reviewed one of my efforts way back! Here's what you wrote: from Elizabeth Emerald
    My sentiments exactly!
    I just joined four days ago; this is my first review. I've already entered three
    contests and had to pay real $$$ in order to get readership. So thanks
    for the first drop in my virtual bucket!

    Cheers.

reply by Elizabeth Emerald on 20-Nov-2020
    Cool! I'm thrilled you recall this! I wince to contemplate that this self-absorbed rant is not just an excerpt of my review; I wrote nothing pertinent to your work besides the insipid 3-word sentence!

reply by the author on 20-Nov-2020
    I think you are too hard on yourself. You were learning how things work here in Storyland...I mean Fanstory. Like, you know, paying off people who nominate you for reviewer of the Month...you do know about that custom, right? :) JK

    I think you are extremely gifted. I see your achievements in less than a year WOW! UGOGURL!

reply by Elizabeth Emerald on 20-Nov-2020
    I am touched that you troubled to review my de-listed piece in great detail--after meticulous mineral research--for a mere two cents!
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Well done. I think this is an internal dialogue many of us have had. It was unique and fun to read. I am back after a hiatus as well. I will have to look at more of your writing. Nice submission!


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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
    Thanks reading and commenting...now get writing! :)
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Pam (respa)
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-Good image and story, Dennis.
-You do a good job
with using only dialogue,
and show this relationship
very well.
-The questioner is pretty
blunt with why the other
person has left, and have
they really found anything better.
-He doesn't seem to have
confident replies, and in
the end agrees on one condition.
-A fun read about FS.
-Thanks for sharing.


 Comment Written 20-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
    Thank you for reading and commenting! Dennis

reply by Pam (respa) on 20-Jan-2020
    You are very welcome, Dennis.
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