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Seeing Behind the Eyes


A book of poems on people.

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LIJ Red
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The Old Virgin
I hear a lot about Puerto Rico, not so much about the Virgin Islands, when they talk about hurricanes. I enjoy your people-picture poems. Excellent.


 Comment Written 15-Feb-2018



reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018
    Yes, Puerto Rico gets most of the attention but the Islands got hit hard too and have kind of been forgotten - the lost child of the US. Thanks so much.
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Good imagery for this ladies devastation in life. to the current ways she lives by and for the humanity choice from others to see and help her out.
Maybe a tad choppy but doesn't take away from your meaning throughout the poem.

lulube


 Comment Written 10-Feb-2018



reply by the author on 12-Feb-2018
    Thank you :)

reply by Lulube on 17-Feb-2018
    welcome

    lulube
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The Old Virgin
Hello, :)
How was your vacation there? Hope it was great.
A lot of people won't leave home because of a natural disaster. I remember Hurricane Katrina -- well people couldn't afford to leave, which is different. May blessings be with all.


 Comment Written 10-Feb-2018



reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
    Vacation was great and they need the tourism to help their economy recover. Thanks for the great review:)
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Rating of Chapter 19 -
The Old Virgin
Kindness is a wonderful
word when we help one another
within our world
Many are very hungry within
our world and very cold
we should all count our blessings.

Honeytree


 Comment Written 10-Feb-2018



reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
    Thanks for your kind review:)
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Wonderful descriptions in your poem, Teresa. There are sure some people we meet who stays with us always. I'm glad you met the chocolate lady and had the time to write and share your thoughts about her.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)


 Comment Written 10-Feb-2018



reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
    Thank you Karyn:)
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Okay...now this one I can jump on the band wagon for :-)
(I love these vignettes)

I enjoyed the back story and the surprise ending...and could
actually imagine the scene as it played out...it just seems so you :-)

Nicely done T :-)



 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018



reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
    You're sweet. Thanks Lorraine:)
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The Old Virgin
Teresa,
You did a great job showing readers this lady with your well-chosen words. I like the short lines They quicken the pace. She seems like one with great strength to withstand the hardships that have come her way. I could picture this lady in my mind. Good job & thanks for sharing & caring. Jan


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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
    Thank you Jan:)
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Hi Teresa. I like to people watch, too. So many interesting humans out there to write about. I enjoyed reading your poem. I hope you had a wonderful time on your trip. Marilyn


 Comment Written 08-Feb-2018



reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
    Thank you Marilyn. We had a wonderful time. It is sad to see the conditions of houses though that people are still living in and some still without electricity.
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Some people are highly independent and will refuse outside help. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is good imagery.


 Comment Written 08-Feb-2018



reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
    Thank you Charlie:)

reply by c_lucas on 10-Feb-2018
    You're welcome.
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Hello my friend this is well written some people are like this lady stay where they are and ride out the storm . I am pleased she survived a strong lady it seems well done ... Jill


 Comment Written 08-Feb-2018



reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
    Thank you so much Jill:)
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