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36. Heartbreak


A collection of Heartbreak Poetry

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You did a good job with your triolet--one of my favorite styles. Your lines read well with good rhymes. Your message is clear. Thanks for the notes.Respectfully, Jan


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    Thank you for the kind comments and feedback.

    Have a great day,
    Sandra.
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Nice triolet where the rhyme and meter serves to keep it very focused on the subject, that one ought not to sell one's soul for fame. The 'monsters' referred to here may be any of at least 3 ideas I can think of, or more. Someone mentioned Faust as an example. I might point out certain people in the Hollywood world, too.


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    Thank you for the kind comments and feedback.

    Have a great day,
    Sandra.
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How far would we go to gain fame? Some people do crazy things. I think the history books and the news may be full of them. Your Triolet is well written. Image is unique and fits well with your theme. Marilyn


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    Thank you for the kind comments and feedback.

    Have a great day,
    Sandra.
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Sandra, This is a very well written Triolet poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very interesting imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri


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    Thank you for the kind comments and feedback.

    Have a great day,
    Sandra.
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Hello Sandra. The triolet style works well for you. I have posted the number of poems and short works on here about the soul. The story of Faust is about the man that sold his soul for fame and fortune.

Robert


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reply by Robert Zimmerman on 24-Feb-2020
    You're welcome
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I enjoyed the rhymes, rhythms and repeats in your Triolet. The "monsters" in the thought-provoking picture you selected reinforce your message. Sighs- Joan


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I Loved your poetry. You produced a very philosophical piece. Your thoughts came together like magic.
The pattern is one you don't see much anymore, and I appreciated the notes and history.
Thanks for sharing.


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    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback.

    Have a wonderful weekend,
    Sandra.
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Wow -- now there is a thought-provocation for the morning, isn't it?! Great job for this one, Sandra, and thank you for sharing with all of us! ;) Yvette


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    Have a wonderful weekend,
    Sandra.
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Wonderful spiritual commentary in your well crafted triolet, Sandra! And thank you for the mention of my post although mine was more about the flesh and yours more about the spirit. Loved your picture, too! Great message to value our souls!!


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    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback.

    Have a wonderful weekend,
    Sandra.
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Ok, my first impression here is, I have now idea how good this poem actually is. I am not refined. Just a high school diploma here. I just like to be creative. I thank you for the triolet lesson. This is one I'd like to try. Thank you for sharing and teaching.
Happy writing,
Larry


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    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback.

    Have a wonderful weekend,
    Sandra.
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