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40. Humor, Fun and Poems about Life


A collection of Humorous Poems

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Can We Survive This Plan?
Great artwork choice. Nice poem. We have to maintain routine in our lives. Corruption from a pandemic is no different. Momentary changes can work to our advantage. You'll be alright. Everybody will have food. Maybe not the usual, but something. Peace be upon you. Have a nice weekend :)


 Comment Written 23-May-2020



reply by the author on 29-May-2020
    Thank you for your time to read and review my work.

    Have a wonderful day,
    Sandra.
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A fine minute poem here Sandra and is this true? These are profound words and I hope that you are not suffering under this lockdown, stay safe, love Dolly x


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I suppose this might measure up as revenge in some ways, as I've said before bad behaviour and prejudice are not confined to any group, it's sinful man whatever his denomination. A beautifully written minute Poem Sandra, blessings, Roy


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Sounds like this poem reflects on all of the millions of people who found themselves at the mercy of something created by someone else. It definitely makes one stop and think for a while. It very generally touches on the rights of whites and non-whites, if I read it right. Interesting post!


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Great job with your minute poem! I hope you will enter more of the contests. You did a great job describing the state of things and the injustices during this hard time.


 Comment Written 22-May-2020



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Can We Survive This Plan?
Hello Sandra your minute poem
Can We Survive This Plan? Has excellent rhyming has a good question? Here I am wondering why three black birds and only white bird on the the telephone line represents?
Yes, Sandra you got me sitting back an pondering.
Gert


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reply by Gert sherwood on 29-May-2020
    Sandra you are welcome
    Gert
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Thanks for sharing your reflections in this social commentary. I liked your use of the Minute Poem and its rhymes, plus the picture of the birds of a feather flocking together. Smiles- Joan


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Sandra, This is a very well written minute poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery with the birds; three dark and one white. These words are very sad to me. It made me think of prejudice and that makes me sad and angry sometimes too. love and blessings, Teri


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Can We Survive This Plan?
I think you nailed it, it's scary how can you survive when there is no work? :"
Can we survive this evil plan
which comes from man?
They take away
our monthly pay."
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.


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    Have a wonderful day,
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Can We Survive This Plan?
This is a very good introduction to the Minute Poetry. You used, very wisely, the limited number of lines available to write your thoughts; it is difficult to comply with rules. This was a good read.


 Comment Written 22-May-2020



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    Have a wonderful day,
    Sandra.
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