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Poodle 10
An interesting 2-4-4 example with a great accompanying visual. I like the clever double entendre in the word: 'sheepishly' as in both 'looking foolish' as well as 'resembling a sheep'. Ditto for the play on words: 'sheared delight' (poodles often need to be trimmed) and the sheer delight bestowed on the owner by this cuddly woolly creature. Good luck in the contest. Best wishes.


 Comment Written 26-Oct-2018



reply by the author on 26-Oct-2018
    Thanks, IS

reply by Impromptu Scribe on 27-Oct-2018
    You are very welcome :) Best wishes
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Poodle 10
I think this is a good entry for the Haiku Poetry contest.
Your poodle description with the funny bit is great.
Well done and thank you for sharing this with us.
Sharon


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    Thanks, Sharon

reply by the author on 26-Oct-2018
    Thanks, Sharon
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I enjoyed your haiku, Bill. Good job expressing your thought in so few syllables. They create a great picture. The real picture is great, too. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan


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    Thanks, Jan

reply by the author on 26-Oct-2018
    Thanks, Jan
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Poodle 10
Gotta love them! Smart dogs ever. My mom had one and she was so incredibly smart. Though I have to go against the 'sheepishly shy'. They are vicious sometimes and bark at everything, hahaha. Love them though. I like the alliteration you made with the 'Sh' sound.


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    Thanks, Loredana

reply by the author on 26-Oct-2018
    Thanks, Loredana
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Precious picture. I like the rhythm of this poem, and the names Zither and Zother. I wonder how old the babies are when they strike out on their own? Cute and jaunty, and a pleasure to read.


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    Thanks, da
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Poodle World
Have you been hallucinating? That picture looks absolutely goofy. Maybe it's part of the "me too" movement. Great use of alliteration. As this is a contest entry, you are right-on with the syllable count and this will be an unusual and humorous entry. Brett Kavanagh must be shuttering at the thought of all that pink power coming after him. judi


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    Thanks, Judi.

reply by judiverse on 26-Sep-2018
    You're very welcome. judi
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A bit of a frightening picture here my friend-may have a nightmare tonight. You do come up with some greats to accomidate your sense of humor and adventurous poem writing.


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    Thanks, FB
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Hahaha. Quite a unique and clever one here my friend. Someone needs to take him to the dog pound I think, but then again the other poor residents have enough to worry about already!


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    Thank you, FB
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I concur. Dog farts are the worst. No matter how cute or elegant the poodle may appear, the smell of her farts will make paint disappear. See how she stands with her nose in the air, she is trying to escape the stench that will literally melt your nose hair. parle vous you old stinkiee poo.


 Comment Written 25-Sep-2018



reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
    Dog farts pierce like nasal nails.

reply by nomi338 on 25-Sep-2018
    exactly!
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Hi Bill. Oh dear. Everyone knows that poodles and ladies don't do that. They expel perfume. Can anything so cute be so foul? Good job with this fun piece. Marilyn


 Comment Written 24-Sep-2018



reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
    Thanks, Marilyn
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