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Rating of Chapter 154 -
Kids
You have spoke volumes in such brevity. This writing as well as the visual art selection are exceptional. I find it dark, yet optimistic as to our
mortality and regeneration.


 Comment Written 08-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
    Thanks, Rmocruz, for giving this a look. Bill
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Rating of Chapter 159 -
Wake and Celebrate
Oh my goodness, what is that artwork choice... The irony of picture and poem. You're too funny. Well thought out. Clearly written. Great visual imagery. Excellent work :)


 Comment Written 07-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
    Thanks again, sunnilicious.
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Rating of Chapter 160 -
A Scary Thought
Dean is truly missed. His animated horror/thriller poems were something. He was a kind man too. May he rest in peace.

I didn't write him a commemorative poem. I haven't written any commemorative poems for any Fanstorian friends that passed away. It's idolization that makes me cry. You're nice. You must be stronger emotionally. Nice poetic gesture :)


 Comment Written 07-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
    He was one of a kind. We?ll not see his like again.
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Joan E.
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Rating of Chapter 153 -
Babysitting Song
Thank you for sharing your granddaughter in this song and photograph, especially since my son is a forty-two-year-old bachelor! I enjoyed the lyrical repeats, especially of the syllables in her name. Cheers- Joan


 Comment Written 20-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019
    Thank you, Joan
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sunnilicious
 
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Babysitting Song
You're hilarious. That is a very focused poem. Praise the baby. But I'm sure that's like great technique for setting a good confidence level. There are so many psychologies. The repetition and repeats work together nicely. Excellent work.

God bless you and your family :)


 Comment Written 20-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019
    This song puts babies named Kimberly asleep. It worked on her sister Emily as well. Of course, I was saying Emily instead of Kimberly, because, well, Kimberly wasn?t born yet. In fact, Liam was born between them and he never went for the singing at all. He was more a go, go, go, go, sleep baby.
    Thank you for giving this a look.
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Rating of Chapter 153 -
Babysitting Song
In a few repetitive verses you express your love eloquently for this beautiful and blessed bundle of joy. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.


 Comment Written 18-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
    Thanks. MA
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brenda faye curtis
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Rating of Chapter 110 -
My Brother Robert
It's odd, sometimes, when we look back on those we have lost, and one specific thing comes to mind, even though that person had a great impact on many aspects of our lives. I remember my brother, Ronnie, who has been gone 22 years, and from him I learned to never be afraid to declare my beliefs.
I'm sure your brother was a great guy. too, as evidenced by your poem.


 Comment Written 13-Nov-2018



reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
    My brother had a lot of fun in front twothirds of hod life. The ladt twenty years were very hard.

reply by brenda faye curtis on 13-Nov-2018
    I'm sorry his life was hard for so long, and I'm sorry for your loss, Bill.
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Rating of Chapter 57 -
Unca Nu and Emily
Aw, what a cute picture, Bill. They both look like they're relaxing into some serious rest time after some play.

I much enjoyed reading and the photograph. :)

Gloria


 Comment Written 11-Nov-2018



reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
    Thanks, Gloria.
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Unca Nu and Emily
A sweet and descriptive poem about love. The image says it all and strengthen the love shown through the words you chose to describe the end of a playful day.


 Comment Written 11-Nov-2018



reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
    Thanks, Loredana
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DonandVicki
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Unca Nu and Emily
They both look so comfortable, especially Emily. These moment are so fleeting. Treasure this poem, this moment and your sweet poem, you should make a copy for both of them.


 Comment Written 11-Nov-2018



reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
    Thanks, D and V
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