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This Time - That Time 3


Third book in the time travel trilogy

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Veenbee
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Rating of Chapter 47 -
The FINAL CHAPTER In The Trilogy
Though I came in the very end, I liked the writing style. I found the story line to be unique. The whole going through time, looking back at yourself, possibly your past actions changing future events. I enjoyed what I read.


 Comment Written 30-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
    Thank you so much for taking a look at this chapter. It was the final chapter of the whole three books and somehow, it all came together perfectly, lol! Goodness knows how. But I'm glad you enjoyed it, I've had some readers ask me to write another book and bring back Mildred and Veronica, I might one day, but not for a while. Thanks again, Veennee. :) Sandra xx

reply by Veenbee on 30-Dec-2019
    My pleasure, have you been writing long? What made you start writing?
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Congratulations on getting published. It's wonderful. Unfortunately I haven't had that much time to read on FanStory and I missed it. I'll try to catch the next one.


 Comment Written 10-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
    Thank you so much, Cindy for the congratulations, it's such a wonderful feeling! :)) xx
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Hello Sandra, congratulations on the book, that's wonderful. I feel the same as you do about this site, it has been very enlightening, entertaining, and helpful. I don't think there is a better source for aspiring writers than this one. Thanks for sharing......hope you have tons of book sales.


 Comment Written 10-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
    Thank you so much for the congratulations and the nice comments. It is a great place to learn and enjoy doing it. (I've still got so much to learn!) :)) Sandra xx
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This is a wonderful post. I have learned a lot from others here on FanStory. I also have grammar problems, and tenses I just can't seem to stay in one tense or the other. Glad you are a published author and I look forward to the day when I can post something like this as a published author.


 Comment Written 10-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
    I'm sure your day will come, Sandra, you are already an excellent writer. Thank you for the congrats, my friend, I'm still riding the clouds! lol. Big hugs, Sandra xx
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YAY YOU!!!
Congratulations!!
I've always wanted to write a
book, but I feel most comfortable
with poetry, so I'm aiming at a
book of poetry.
I so agree...if not for the intensive,
wonderful reviewers, I'd be a mess.
YAY FANSTORY!!!
Congratulations again,
Blessings...


 Comment Written 09-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
    I have a book of poetry out as well, so go for it! It's something that makes you immortal! lol. Thank you so much for the wonderful, enthusiastic congrats, I really appreciate that. Fanstory will get you where you want to go! Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx

reply by Irish Rain on 10-Jul-2019
    Big hugs to you also!! So HAPPY for you!!
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Congratulations to you. Your writing shows it's never too late to follow your dream. I also joined some time ago when urged on by my little sister. She said we would both join but she never did. I did and so glad. Like you this site has been a great encouragement. I also just published my first book. The Curse of 'Gator Bayou sold on Amazon.com. It's a wonderful feeling to finally get "it" published. I wish you many more books in your future. Jo Shoemake


 Comment Written 09-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
    While you can breathe and your fingers can tap the keyboard, there is no age limit to getting your book out there. I must check out your book it sounds intriguing! Thank you for the congrats, my friend, and the same to you! :)) Sandra xx
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My most sincere congratulations, Sandra. Fanstory gave me the gift of meeting you as we struggled through our writing together. When you're famous, I can brag at owning your first three novels.


 Comment Written 09-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
    Thank you so very much, Diane! How are you getting on with yours? I'm waiting to buy it and put a review on Amazon as the best saga I've ever read! Yours would make a lovely film. Big hugs for the 6, and you have my messenger address, give me a call when you can. :)) Sandra xx
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CONGRATULATIONS & BIG HUGS!!! I am thrilled for you, Sandra, and your wonderful advice for listening to and applying constructive criticism in the manner in which it is offered DOES pay off. Well done and thank you for sharing this as it will inspire many.


 Comment Written 09-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
    Aw, thank you so much for that, Mystic Angel, I meant every word. I would never have been able to write one novel let alone a trilogy had it not been for everyone on here. Thanks again, my friend. :)) Sandra x
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Chick, it has been amazing, watching you branch out and try your hand at writing a book...and doing it so well!!
Congratulations on the published end product. :-)


 Comment Written 09-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
    Thank you so very much, Sue, that is so sweet of you. I enjoyed your reviews and was very grateful when you pointed out my errors. Thanks, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
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Congratulations Sandra. That is phenomenal news... published!! And a trilogy to boot.

I read many of the chapters but was unable to review being locked out as a standard member. I never lost sight of one of my favorite authors on FanStory.

Once again, congrats, John


 Comment Written 09-Jul-2019



reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
    Thank you so very much, John, for your lovely words. I didn't realise I'd locked out the standard reviewers, I'll change that. I had one 'nice' person tell me he disagreed with all I said and that nearly all FS members are terrible writers, well, that brought me back to earth! Lol. Thanks again, my friend. xxx Sandra xx
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