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Dear Diary


My diary, with imaginations and some real events.

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Y. M. Roger
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Rating of Chapter 9 -
May 2019
Wow, you've been a busy bee, Richard!! ;) Thanx so much for sharing with us! :) ;) I've included some grammatical catches below -- have a wonderful evening! ;)

plants, and am --> plants and am

grow it's quicker --> grow, it's quicker

Monday and the monologue "Angus" is my homework, and is --> Monday, and the monologue, "Angus", is my homework and is

Or should I say --> Or, I should say

Yesterday got a new --> Yesterday, got a new

about the my favourite --> about my favourite

So in theory we --> So, in theory, we

But as that --> But, as that

May, and am --> May, and I am

Well I'm sure --> Well, I'm sure


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Rating of Chapter 9 -
May 2019
Richard, I've really enjoyed reading what you've been up to over the past few weeks. I had wondered...! The picture of the alpine plants is lovely. I hope yours turns out just as nice :)
Hope to be reading you again soon. Best wishes, Debra :)


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Rating of Chapter 8 -
March 2019
Hi Richard,
I went to read through your March Diary. Boy, was I lucky - just the two entries... Well, I was very lucky - because my hand (which had surgery) had some complications. So I have been MIA a lot around here.

Also, I haven't been on GMAIL as much either. Things are going to get a little nutty for me and if I have missed any email from you I apologize in advance. I also ran into some snags with my book. So needless to say, a hiatus I didn't want to take has happened.

I did need to award you one of the stunning 6's though. It should show that I think your March Diary was much funnier than your February. It had me cracking up - I enjoyed the picture with the two ducks. I love that they only stay 3 feet apart, I would like to be the female of a two-some like that someday.

I had typed at the beginning of March and created a contest entry for the end of this month. When I went to look to see that it posted properly; I made sure that I checked in on you.

This was rather comical. I enjoyed it thoroughly - especially including the part about nuts. I am a cashew. I have always considered myself a little soft.

When you wrote, "I thought I had posted a 5th March entry, but obviously not. This is the first.
Getting on well regarding my creative writing."

I starting laughing so loudly and uncontrollably and wanted you to combine the two sentences!!!

When you wrote, "All meals provided! Fab and double fab! - Can you please qualify for me what is the difference between a fab meal and a double fab meal and exactly what are you eating. I am being nosey but I want to know!
and I get they are free - which is obviously double fab...

I love that you throw in as messed around a lot like, a lot of internet chess. LOL
Mine would be a lot of Words with Friends.

I am very proud of the affiliations that you have now joined. I should share with you the scathing review I did of one said "Global Warming" write and an individual here in Fan Story who tried to cram his right-wing agenda down my throat. It was long and laborious to read actually I was probably 1 of very few reviewers because of the intense length of his (POEM) more like War & Peace revisited in poem though and form. Anyway, I did review him and I tried to stay polite but threw a few zingers in for him to show him I wasn't just your normal dumb girl and took his words verbatim. It was a lot. But I think it is important for you to read to see what kind of stuff gets done in the name of science when in reality the scientist taking part (have agendas) are filtered through specific sets of eyes to skew what is happening to our planet and confuse the people who are already confused enough (most people on average are dumb). We have to face the facts that most people are not smart. They don't care for the most part, and their stance on Environment is: I can't do much about it, so why would I care. The more they turn a blind eye, the more they make the planet sick. The purpose of the write before - yes? Okay so I am giving you a 6 for all that you've done and all that you do. I will continue to revisit when I am allowed to type again. I have used up today's quota in your review. I am not joking! Cheers, Fonda


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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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    Fonda,

    Thanks for your six!

    Have just done my homework for this Friday's creative writing class. Then spotted a competition on FS.

    With two hours to go, I simply used the original idea but slanted it with the theme of secrecy.

    It's not my style of writing. I like dialog, and at least two characters.

    Never mind. A short story is easier to write.

    Hope things are ok with you.

    Thanks,

    Richard.

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Rating of Chapter 8 -
March 2019
You always amaze me. Because you have decided to write and write to keep you centered in one job, is to write. Your strength and self-assurance I can tell are running towards a beautiful end. A scriptwriter. Amazing. Good luck. Love Terry xoxo


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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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    Hi Terry,

    Hope you are ok today.


    Reading and writing are fun. Also I like comic radio dramas and comedy films.

    Life could not be much better, leaving health issues aside.

    Thanks,

    Richard.

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Rating of Chapter 8 -
March 2019
He he he, I know that ice cream van, it is an old vehicle and it is disgusting that it bellows out fumes in the town centre! I couldn't agree more, good for you writing to the council! Love Dolly x


 Comment Written 13-Mar-2019



reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
    Thanks,

    We'll see what happens. A council meeting. Topic deferred. A consultation. A referendum. Legal advice. By which time, there may be a plague of mice!.

    Richard.

reply by Dolly'sPoems on 14-Mar-2019
    Everything takes an age with the council, but they are concerned about the environment so I hope they take note of what you said and I might even put in my own letter when I get back! Love Dolly x
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Rating of Chapter 8 -
March 2019
This chapter of the diary, March 13th, shows quite a bit of pro-active measures to increase your literary knowledge and gain some mentoring from a likely source. Good luck.


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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
    Hi Bill,

    Yes I am constantly looking out for ideas.

    Yesterday I reflected on what makes a great written character.

    Not too hard to observe a few, as I waited 4 hours in the Accident and Emergency waiting room at hospital.[not me hurt].

    Thanks,

    Richard.
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Rating of Chapter 7 -
February 2019
* Identify my writing style.
* Do interesting things and meet interesting people.

Hi Richard, it is becoming like a look forward to read your everyday life for me. Why? Because I can also learn from your writings. My feeling is as if we are talking to each other. I have an excellent company to share my days with. Thank you. Terry xoxo
My six goes to you.


 Comment Written 06-Feb-2019



reply by the author on 07-Feb-2019
    Hi Terry,

    Life is exciting.
    Hope you're having a great day.

    It's great you look at my diary.
    You are the only one.
    Thanks,
    Richard
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Rating of Chapter 7 -
February 2019
Richard,
Good to know what you've been up to - you must be exhausted. What type of cake did you have with your afternoon tea at Abbey Grange yesterday? (it's important that I know!)
Great news about the creative writing course soon to be starting up - get yourself on it! Just signed up for my level 3 in Supporting Teaching and Learning in schools. I need the qualification should my job become redundant and I have to find something else.... Got bag loads of experience but the qualification is what will get me an interview. Not really got the time, but needs must..
Bye for now, Debs :)


 Comment Written 06-Feb-2019



reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
    Hi Debs,

    Thanks for your review.

    No cake, am overweight!

    Hope your Level 3 goes well.


    Bye for now

    Richard

reply by Debra White on 07-Feb-2019
    Disappointed to hear about the ?no cake.?
    I just baked some chocolate buns for the brood, smells lovely in my kitchen.
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Rating of Chapter 7 -
February 2019
Why would you put forth something you say is of no literary worth?
I would think I'd died and gone to heaven to be at the Derby museum featuring Leonardo sketches...take us into that..what if you were Leonardo's pencil lol
God bless


 Comment Written 05-Feb-2019



reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
    Hi Jenny,

    Thanks for your review.

    Yes life is exciting if you're writing as everything is a potential story.

    Thanks,

    Richard.
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Rating of Chapter 7 -
February 2019
Hi there,

Very interesting to go backward - it does make the timeline make a certain kind of sense in this order, though. Setting three important goals for the month is key - but have you broken the goals up into pieces so that each day you are doing something to achieve each goal?

Thank you for sharing,

~Mustang Patty~


 Comment Written 05-Feb-2019



reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
    Hi Patty,

    My main goal is to get something published, but I don't want to deviate from my style.

    So am urgently looking around, and researching.

    Native Peoples' spirituality is my current research.

    I want to find out if it is much different from my own spirituality.

    How about you?

    What is your main aim re writing in 2019?

    Thanks,

    Richard.

reply by Mustang Patty on 06-Feb-2019
    Hi, Richard,

    I am currently working on the second novel in a trilogy.

    Additionally, I am getting into the Copywriting market through writing emails, newsletters, and ad copy for businesses. I am hoping to land a client by June 1st - and while my monetary goal for this year isn't very big - it will support my first love - fiction writing.

    Thanks for asking. I hope you will check out my novel if you have the time - I'm posting rough drafts of chapters here for FS feedback,

    ~Mustang Patty~
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