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I don't think any of us could survive without a large sense of humor, but take heart--people are always generously offering you writing material and not even charging for it!


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This sense of humor has served you well. And your readers. The sign had me in stitches. All the exclamation marks. I'm still laughing. I think I'm going to start copying down signs. I have a friend who would love this story.


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LOL! Been there and done that for sure. I applaud your constraint and so does G-d :). Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.


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This reminds me of Bill Engvall's Here's Your Sign. Don't you hate people that not only won't take advice but they're rude about it in the process.


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You still have a dollar store where things really are a dollar? Guess they can't afford to hire the best and brightest. LOL Thanks for a fun read.


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When I visit the Dollar Tree I am a smarta**, when they give the total I point to the EVERYTHINGS A DOLLAR and say it does not say each item is a dollar it says everything. The get flustered I laugh.
Rikki:)


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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
    HAHAHAHAHAHA!!! You are a wiseguy!! That's a good one, though. xo

reply by Rikki66 on 16-Jul-2019
    Their slogan is to inviting.
    XO
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Yep, in the old days everything in the dollar store cost a dollar. Now the name of the store has expanded. Now prices vary and go beyond one dollar. It's still the cheapest price around, but be prepared to fork over several dollars an item.

Joy xx


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    Nothing stays the same, I guess. Even the Dollar Store deals with inflation.
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LOL!! Oh, yeah, been there - done that....yes! They are such brilliant and customer-oriented folks, are they not?! :) :) As a wonderful friend of mine has me saying lately: Oy!! :)Thoroughly enjoyed this as I have been in this exact situation on more than one occasion -- love the sarcasm you've written into it ... so perfect! ;) ;) Yvette


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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
    Sarcasm: just one more service I offer!! (And you must be the only Louisianian [is that the correct term?] who says 'Oy!' But it captures every emotion, does it not?!)

    Thanks for the validating review. xo

reply by Y. M. Roger on 16-Jul-2019
    LOL! Don't forget, I'm in Alabama now and they already think I pronounce some things 'silly' [a New Orleans' accent is very much like a Brooklyn one...in fact, when my mom and dad lived up in West Virginia, they had folks think they were from New York! ;) ;) Even though I don't have near the accent they do (long story there!), folks around here just expect crazy things from me anyway so, the 'oy!' works... love it! ;) :) Take care, you! ;)

reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
    I'm sorry; Alabama, not Louisiana! So nothing you say surprises those who know you! Now THAT is a luxury!! xo

reply by Y. M. Roger on 16-Jul-2019
    Well, now that would depend on how you look at it...like what other things have I said that nothing surprises them anymore... LOL! LOL! :) ;)

reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
    Yes, good point! hahaha.
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Rachelle:

I feel you on this one. Maybe those stores should
change their name to nothing more than a dollar
or "A Buck and Below" similar to the "$5 and below"
stores. Sometimes these situations can make the
best of us lose our cool.
thanks for sharing
jan


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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
    Guilty as charged on THAT one, Jan!!
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That's just funny. It makes you wonder what were the qualifications for this job anyway. I guess it depends on the employer. I'm sure that everyone in line was probably giving her the eye roll along with all of those unspoken words hanging in the air as you've so eloquently stated. I like this and the way you handled yourself. Well done!


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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
    Actually, that part was stunning, too, because NONE of them seemed to think it was odd! When she first asked her boss the price of my item, I looked to everyone else in line, and NOT ONE of them gave me a conspiratorial grin. I knew I was totally on my own. SO weird!!

    Thank you for the nice review, Jeffrey. xo
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