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Silent Partners


Biography of Antonio Giuseppe McCarron

  3 total reviews 
Comment by
Alex Rosel
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Script: Silent Partners Scene 2
I enjoyed reading this. The prose flows nicely and it's an easy read.

I'm not a scriptwriter, but here are a couple of points I picked up on:

It's Charmin clean -- I like this turn of phrase. It gives your character, AJ, attitude :)

George Jorgeson: So, you're from a large family? -- I like this a lot. It's so typical of the inane questioning of a TV host; AJ has just detailed he has six siblings.



 Comment Written 30-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this script. When I write them it is hard to know how readers will respond. Much appreciated review.
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gudbjorg
 
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Rating of Chapter 2 -
Script: Silent Partners Scene 2
I liked this story a lot and was able to relate to it as I grew up on a farm in Iceland. We also were a big family so there were always people around. We had a lot of fun and experiences that has been a strength to me many times over in this life.
Your story is to me very clear and easy to read and kept my attention all the way through. I loved it especially the section on the animals and of course the horses. Love them.


 Comment Written 28-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this script. Much appreciate the review.
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shaffer40
 
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Script: Silent Partners Scene 2
I read both sections of the script. It reads realistic, without errors, and the character is interesting. That commercial mock is pretty funny.

I'm thinking about trying a script, and you've inspired me.

One thing about this line:
"His head must of weighed at least fifty pounds. "
I'm not sure if you meant to say "must of" because it's dialogue and that's the way it sounds when we talk. If not, it should be "must have."


 Comment Written 28-Jun-2019



reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this script. Much appreciate the review.
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