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Rosemary Everson1
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Rating of Chapter 102 -
He Promised Me...
This picture is very gorgeous. I'm so very sorry about the loss of your twins. May God be with you in the coming year. (We have twins also in my family; I pray constantly for my family (children, grandchildren and great grandchildren).


 Comment Written 31-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 02-Jan-2020
    That is all we can do. Thank you so much
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Rating of Chapter 111 -
I'm Gonna Win!
Great job. For a minute there I thought this was a takeoff on one of the FanStory contests in which you were first and then slid down as more reviews came in. Once in a while we DO like to come in first. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn


 Comment Written 30-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 02-Jan-2020
    Thank you so very much, it was fun to think up, I don't do shorts a lot
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Rating of Chapter 111 -
I'm Gonna Win!
Cute story, Barb! Now that's a good peripeteia - we didn't know it was an arcade game until the very end when he asks for another quarter. Great job and wish you success in the contest!


 Comment Written 30-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 02-Jan-2020
    Thank you it was fun to do. I don't like prose but I remember Michael told me to dabble anyway.
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Rating of Chapter 104 -
Wow, Where Did It Go?
For all you worry about what others think - it's not worth it. We're all in the same saggy, baggy, droopy club. But we're alive and are still us behind the cover. It's health which matters and being accepted for who we are. If we get too concerned with others' opinions it leads to people pleasing. Been there, done that, bought a whole truck load of t shirts. thanks for your amusing yet serious poem
Hugs, Trisha


 Comment Written 30-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 02-Jan-2020
    LOL me too, Thank you so much for the chuckle

reply by Bucketlist on 03-Jan-2020
    Anytime
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Rating of Chapter 111 -
I'm Gonna Win!
Barb, This is a really cute and well written 75 word flash fiction story you have penned for the contest. It had me going at first as I read it. Very cute words and adorable art work. Thanks for sharing. Love and blessings! Happy New Year! Teri


 Comment Written 30-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
    I am honored and I thank you so very much0
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I'm Gonna Win!
A different style for you! I must admit I thought you were dreaming of being #1 on FS.. you've come up from 50#s # 8. A cute ending to put me straight! Thanks forr sharing , good luck in the contest
Hugs


 Comment Written 30-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
    Wow thank you for the great words, I am honored

reply by Bucketlist on 30-Dec-2019
    No problem!

reply by Bucketlist on 30-Dec-2019
    No problem!
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I'm Gonna Win!
This is a delightful read. I can remember feeling like that as a child, long ago though it was. Imagination can take us anywhere, and this child was almost at the finish line when the quarter played out. 8-)


 Comment Written 30-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
    LOL thank you so much
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Rating of Chapter 111 -
I'm Gonna Win!
Another fine story, Barb--and how well I remember as a kid begging Mom for quarters so I could play the games while she shopped, shopping was BORING, and Speed Racer was on at home!


 Comment Written 30-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
    I agree with you, thank you
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Rating of Chapter 111 -
I'm Gonna Win!
"I'm Going Win!"
Is a 75 word flash fiction Contest Entry rich in Theme and Imagery.
But in the story, unfortunately you don't.
Seems as if a dream?
I'm posting one a little later.
"Rolling Thunder!"
Thanks,
And good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1024


 Comment Written 30-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
    Thank you for seeing the humor in it and for the great reivew

reply by Ricky1024 on 30-Dec-2019
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Pam (respa)
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Rating of Chapter 111 -
I'm Gonna Win!
-Nice artwork, Barb.
-This is a cute story
told by this child.
-He/She is so intent
on winning, and tries so hard.
-You create the suspense well.
-There are some obstacles to face.
-But wait-the car needs a pit stop!
-Great twist at the end.
-I enjoyed the story; good luck
in the contest!


 Comment Written 30-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
    Thank you, I wish it could have been longer, it was fun to write.

reply by Pam (respa) on 30-Dec-2019
    You are very welcome, Barb. It was a fun story, and it came through very well.
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