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Saying Goodbye to Phyllis


a book of tributes

  16 total reviews 
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MoonWillow
 
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Rating of Chapter 11 -
Saying Goodbye to Phyllis
Thank you for this, Sasha. If you hadn't posted this I would never have known about Phyllis. So sad. So many have left FS is a sad way... we will miss them all. We are all getting along in age, and sometimes it's very depressing to come into FS just to find that another great author and friend has moved on. Kudos to you for this tribute to Phyllis! Stay well. :)shawn


 Comment Written 08-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 08-Feb-2020
    Thank you. Phillis will be dearly miss, as are those that have shared their talent with us and are no longer with us. In so many ways, we are a family.
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Rating of Chapter 5 -
Limericks for Phyllis
Such a great loss to us,
but she joins many fine writers
that have left recently.
I love your wonderful limericks,
a lovely memorial,
Blessings...


 Comment Written 27-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
    Thanks - as a writer and as someone enduring hardships with grace, she was an inspiration.

reply by Irish Rain on 28-Jan-2020
    Yes, she certainly was!
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Rating of Chapter 15 -
Ethereal
This is a lovely, very well-written posting in tribute to Phyllis. Upon reading it, I'm sure her family will appreciate her shining character more, if that is even possible. It's wonderful to have people like her touch our lives no matter how brief a time it may be. I'm sure Phyllis would be thrilled to know that you are going to give limericks a try. :-)


 Comment Written 23-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
    thank you for your comments, Janet. Any limericks I do manage to produce will be totally due to Phyllis's influence, and I am not ashamed to admit that.
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Iza Deleanu
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Rating of Chapter 15 -
Ethereal
It's so great when authors are helping other aspiring authors and bringing this fact up about Phyllis is just another way to keep her presence and memory alive.


 Comment Written 23-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
    This is why I chose that aspect. I know she did it for a lot of people, and it was always so personally axed. And she never made me feel stupid or as though I was wasting her time. To me being a great coach/teacher is perhaps as important in its own way as being a great writer.
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Rating of Chapter 15 -
Ethereal
This is a really great poem. I loved it Ur a very good poet keep up the great work.......................................................................................................................................


 Comment Written 23-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
    Thank you for reading
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Rating of Chapter 22 -
farewell blossom child
This piece for Phyllis, Farewell Blossom Child, is a heartfelt acknowledgement of her wide appeal to all of us. Thank you, Cass, for remembering Phyllis with this closing.


 Comment Written 18-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
    Dear Bill, thank you for your review and the five stars,These words were written from the heart, Bill and my eyes were filled with tears as they poured from fingers to page.Thank you for your reassurance that they were seemly and fitting. yours truly Cass
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Susan Larson
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Rating of Chapter 22 -
farewell blossom child
I am relatively new to fanstory, but what I noticed about Phyllis is when I reviewed her work, her reply was always very personal and insightful. I was looking forward to developing a friendship with her. Maybe I still can. Over coffee and, in my case, Sara Lee cake.


 Comment Written 16-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
    Phyllis's work is still available to read and appreciate.I encourage you to do so. Just go to her portfolio and dip in. Phyllis would be happy for you to do that and you would have the chance to see how well read and wise she was in the ways of the world.Her understanding of Law and Order amazed me. Phyllis once told me she loved cake. Any kind of cake. So Sara Lee would be fine with her. cheers Cass
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Rating of Chapter 7 -
Dedication to Phyllis
Many thanks for your tribute to Phylis. I too did not know that she had a longstanding illness, especially since she always communicated optimism. She made a lasting contribution to FanStoey. May Phylis rest in peace. Warm regards- Joan


 Comment Written 16-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
    Hello Joan, thank you for your review. Phyllis's passing was so sudden and she will be missed. Always good to hear from you - warm regards Dorothy x
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Ideasaregems-Dawn
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Rating of Chapter 9 -
In Memory
Ulla, what a lovely tribute to Phyllis. I think sometimes that we tend to offer platitudes because we simply can't find the words to offer someone in his or her grief, but your tribute is honest and sweet. Methinks Phyllis would be proud.


 Comment Written 16-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
    Thank you so much, Dawn, and I'm glad you think so. It certainly came from the heart. I will miss her. Ulla xx

reply by Ideasaregems-Dawn on 16-Jan-2020
    You're very welcome.
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Sharon Haiste
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Rating of Chapter 22 -
farewell blossom child
I think this is a lovely tribute to Phyllis and a nice addition to her book/story.
Well written and well told.
She will be missed by all here and her family and friends besides.
Well said.
Sharon


 Comment Written 15-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
    Dear Sharon thank you for your review and the five stars Thank you also for your kind words regarding the quality of my words. They came straight from my heart, so at least I can say they are utterly sincere. cheers Cass
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