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Pearl Edwards
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Rating of Chapter 10 -
Narcissism Pushed Too Far
I know this is too close for reality for you Barb, but for me who hasn't had that, I just enjoyed the poem, and knowing it was fiction, was glad she wiped the grin from his face.Great little 100 word flash fiction story,
cheers,
valda


 Comment Written 22-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
    Thank you so very much
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Rating of Chapter 9 -
Had His Luck Changed?
I like how you have quickly set the scene with Joseph driving toward the end of the rainbow in quest of his dream of finding gold. It's fun for the reader to visualize the tricky leprechaun painting. Rod


 Comment Written 12-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
    Just my kinda luck. LOL Thank you
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country ranch writer
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Had His Luck Changed?
Sneaky little devils they sure are out to trick you in every way they can to spoil all you hopes and wishes of gathering of the gold.


 Comment Written 12-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
    Just my kinda luck. LOL Thank you

reply by country ranch writer on 13-Mar-2020
    Smiles

reply by country ranch writer on 13-Mar-2020
    Smiles

reply by country ranch writer on 13-Mar-2020
    Smiles
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Rating of Chapter 7 -
Did I Hear Her?
This is an amazing story but I can believe every word of it because things have happened in my own life that have no logical explanation other than a higher power in control as you say in your story. You have told the story in a way to keep your readers hanging on believing something unusual is about to occur. Nice writing.


 Comment Written 22-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 23-Feb-2020
    I am honored and i thank you so much
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Did I Hear Her?
What a powerful story. Bless her heart, she held on until she knew you could hear her. God works in many ways, and I think this was one of them.

Well written. I think you have a winner. Good luck!


 Comment Written 22-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 23-Feb-2020
    Thank you so
    much for the great review
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Rating of Chapter 6 -
The Ghost Hunter
The Ghost Hunter was an interesting story reminding me of the one on TV.
I really have problems believing in quantities of Ghostly hauntings, but not possessions.
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I know that there's literally hundreds of thousands of exorcisms done in the world every year!
Google it.
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This was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly!
Ricky


 Comment Written 21-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
    Thank you so much
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Rating of Chapter 6 -
The Ghost Hunter
Squeak is beautiful and you are her best friend. What a despicable behavior her former owners displayed. God will get them for that. I'm thrilled that with your love, she has blossomed. As I read this, I imagined her chasing and catching the ghosts of her former owners and destroying them--good thing, too. Thank you for rescuing that precious 'baby.' Respectfully, Jan


 Comment Written 15-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
    Oh I like that vision. Thank you so much
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damommy
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The Ghost Hunter
What a delight Squeak is. She was lucky you got her. What patience to go under the bed and work with her, and it was successful. Some of my cats have imaginary playmates. It's so funny watching them. Thanks for participating.


 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
    Thank you for the great reivew
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Rating of Chapter 6 -
The Ghost Hunter
Barb,

hahaha Tooooo bizarre.

A couple - some dear friends of mine when I was really young - had a baby. At the time, they lived in an old, old house where the doors would open all by themselves and the air would click on or turn off all by itself. WEIRD STUFF.

Every time I was holding him (he was just a few weeks old at the time) he'd be cooing and talking and looking at me and we'd be talking so nicely. Then, all of a sudden, his gaze would go to a place above me or to my right or wherever and his eyes would go big and his mouth would form a big 'O' and he would get sooooo excited. He'd start jabbering away.

I would cautiously looooook around, but of course, there was never anything there. I've be like, 'Bobbbbby Raaaay, stop that.'

But he wouldn't mind me at all, of course, just kept having his talks with those mystery visitors. YUCK.

It was awful. hahahaha I was so happy when they moved out of that house! I dont' know if I believe in ghosts or not, but I was so uncomfortable there!

Glad you had someone to protect you!


 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
    My granddaughter would look at the ceiling and laugh. It was after her parents were killed and I know it was them she was seeing. Thank you dear friend
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Rating of Chapter 6 -
The Ghost Hunter
Barb, This is a very sweet, but somewhat sad story about your little ghost hunger, Squeak. That is so sad that people terrorize little animals as if they are doing noting wrong. You used great words and an adorable picture of Squeak. Thank you so much for sharing this story. love and blessings, Teri


 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
    Thank you so much for the support
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